PLEASE BE MINE...!!!
PLEASE BE MINE!!!
Your care,
your smile, your face, your voice, your messages, your calls, your thoughts,
your memory, you, you, you, you…..and only you….. You are all around me,
surrounding me like atmosphere, deep inside me like an ocean, deep rooted like
an old peepal over the desert soil of my emotions. You brought the smile to my
life, taught me a new way of life. Changed me completely.
I live just to be with you, to watch the world
chanting the happy song just for you, to see all the rose petals through the
heaven pouring themselves all over you, the dew droplets conserving themselves
just to see you in the early morning with the first ray of sun enlightening
them. The meaning of taking air is just to inhale your fragrance; the meaning
of drinking water is just to meet your soul, the meaning of food is to feel
your care, the meaning of myself….. I forgot. The only thing I remember is you
and only you. Don’t leave me alone in the race of life.
You are the
one I dream of, I care for, I think of all the time whenever the sun is in the
universe. I don’t know the extent of an ocean, the shape of wind, the birth of
rain, the death of soul and the limit of love for you. It’s beyond limit. I
need you in my life as I need you in me. My thoughts have been restricted to
you and I want this restriction till my last breath. I wanna die watching you,
in your lap, with your soft hands over my head and a glimpse of love from your
infinite eyes.
I can’t sing
song, I can’t play guitar, I can’t dance, I don’t have a great sense of humour,
I am not rich enough, I am not a prince charming but above all, you are my
world where I reside every single moment on this globe. Every single definition
of happiness will be defined as per you say; your single nod is enough to bring
the queen of happiness to serve you, worries will be far away from your fort of
existence.
The
existence of mine depends on you, just BE MINE. As the time passes, my desire
for you increases exponentially. Shona, I was never confused and will never be.
Never thought like this for anyone else. You know my history, but I want you to
know my present, I want you to be my future. Never ever leave me alone. Want to
live my life just with you. Without you, I am a bird in desert searching for
shade, a fish out of blue, a prisoner inside a cell for nothing, a life without
a meaning and a body without a skeleton. Be my destiny, be my love, be my life,
be mine and only mine…….PLEASE BE MINE!!!!!!!!
Are you a professional writer, is it your own story or is it your random thought that you have presented so beautifully and smoothly??? Answer me because i need to know. I am moved by your creation as i accidently happened to go through it and i must admit, whatsoever, you are deep thinking and incredible writer.
ReplyDeletehi...thanx for your compliments.. i am glad that you liked it...actually,i am not a professional writer, i am just a mechanical engineering student...this is my own story...all the stories are my own.. these are the parts of my life which i lived somewhere in past....:)
Deleteoo..ur life is full of stories..nwy continue writing, i mst say u hv a good hand at dt, mainly 'common slaves', 'love story of stone'..r rlly admirable..gud luck 4 ur writing n ur love story metaphored by dt of stone....i like reading ur blogs..:)
ReplyDeletethanx 4 such a lovely compliment... i m really glad dat u liked my blog... i think every person has a story 2 tell at every point of tym...:)
ReplyDeletebtw can i ask u 4 a favor??can i knw d person behind this anonymous shadow??i would love 2 knw abt u and also it's necessary 4 me as u r d 1st one 2 say something like dat 4 my blog....i must knw u...wat say???can u help me??
yeah..i ll tell u..ds is shaina, hii!!....nd u deserve such lovely compliments:)
ReplyDeletehiii shaina ( widout nahiwal, i guess)
Deletedis is jst a name.. i asked abt u...i mean, if it's olright 4 u...
yeah of course...its shaina varma...,m 4m pune,doing b.tch(it), 3rd year,...n m basically 4m patna.....nd luckily or unluckily m not shaina nehwal....dts it..:)
ReplyDeletehi shaina, nice 2 meet u.(literary)
Deletehope u njoy rest of my articles 2 :)
by d way u comment or like my pieces, i guess u 2 have a writer inside u,if u 2 write any articles or anything, i would love 2 be a reader of dat....:)
yes..actually i do write nd m too fond of reading such real pieces,n in ur writing i find some reflections dtsy hv got so attached....i feel if u hv presented my feelings so beautifully nd truly( though they r urs)....nd u write even on general issues, i don't do dat normally, i just at times express my emotions thru some pieces......but still i like such pieces nd of course since i hv read urs, m rlly infatuated n lve it...:)jst continue ds 4 admirers like me....:)
ReplyDeletei would love 2 read ur creations,if it's ok wid u 2 share ur articles.i write only when i m feeling something 2 much..every tym i feel anything abstract,i just pen it down, it makes me feel relaxed a bit. anyways it's really sweet of u 2 call urself my admirer but i m sure it's a big word 4 a person like me...:)
ReplyDeleteyeah rlly its so soothing to pen down feelings beautifully....i ll surely share mine sometime but ryt now m not so sure about it, so plz do'nt mind......just allow me to read urs nd comliment honestly....i love to do that.....they hv rlly made me ur admirer....:)(shaina)
ReplyDeleteobviously i won't mind, it's urs..:)
ReplyDeleteand i publish my articles so that everyone can read...:)
but i am never sure abt d timings of my article, it's ol random, whenever i feel much abt something, i pen it down, how will u come 2 knw dat i wrote something?? and thanx 4 ol ur compliments, they r really very sweet and encouraging....:)
writing articles is random of course, dts very true.....even i do write when m ecstatic abt smthng or feel low,sharing it on paper feels very relaxed, bt m nt sure ryt now if its worth 2 b read by odrs.......
ReplyDeletei open ur blog lmst evrydy since d day i 1st happened 2 visit it, so i can see d new....but if u do'nt mind i will mail to u my eid so dat u can plz infrm me if u write smthng new...dt ll b kind n sweet of u....but nly if u don't mind.....
never think about others' reaction when it's just for u...u can share ur creations and don't think whether others will like it or not... i did the same...:)
ReplyDeleteof course u can send me ur eid, it would be my pleasure to tell u abt my next article, at least i will have 1 pageview for sure dis way....:)
it's really nice and touching..
ReplyDeletethanx bhai....:)
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